Monday, October 12, 2009

I.Skateboarding issue on campus at UCF.

1. Introduction.

-Describe issue.
-Describe how serious the issue is.
-Thesis of commentary.

2.Main body of commentary.

a) Explain the issue through the eyes of people walking on campus.
-Time it takes to get to class.
-Injuries.
-Having to watch out for skateboarders.
-How it would be without the skateboarders.

b) Explain through the eyes of skateboarders.
-Time it takes to get to class.
-How injuries could be avoided.
-Reasons for not eradicating skateboarding.

c) Explain possible resolutions for the issue.
-Eradicating skateboarding altogether.
-Making separate lanes for skateboards.
-Restraints on times and places for skateboarding.
-How these changes would effect the outcome.

3. Conclusion

-Conclude the opinions of both sides.
-Conclude possible resolutions.
-Conclude thesis.

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